NOTE TO WANG WEI How could you be so happy, now some thousand years dishevelled, puffs of dust? It leaves me uneasy at last, your poems tease me to the verge of tears, and your fate. It makes me think. It makes me long for mountains & blue waters. Makes me wonder how much to allow. (I'm reconfirming, God of bolts & bangs, of fugues & bucks, whose rocket burns & sings.) I wish we could meet for a drink in a "freedom from ten thousand matters." Be dust myself pretty soon; not now. —  John Berryman



Pick one poem... thoughts on process: not so simple as I unthinkingly assumed.

To fess up: my shelves are all but bare: a browning version of Walt Whitman ’55— from which I’d give you Leaf 26, urbanmusic... not Neruda, he's too far South, and he, like Donne, writes his woman as landscape. And not the lanky Gary Snyder, looking west from the last frontier— happily logging redwoods and a new ecology of myth.

The fallback : memory...
Lowell in tweed, taller than the lower lecture theater tiers, dim, inflection affectless, intonations tuned right down; his readings unrecalled... or loping across the tracks, past a youthful Sidney Goldfarb:

When I sit in the hiring hall Waiting for my number to fall dead off the board Then I really read the newspapers It wouldn't do to bring an anthology of Russian poetry Into the hiring hall of Local 6 Of the so-called International Longshoremen and Warehousemen's Union

—nope. None these will be my poem—not even Louis Simpson’s Walt-encounter at Bear Mountain, though the last lines lodged in my backbrain fifty years ago:

And the angel in the gate, the flowering plum, Dances like Italy, imagining red.

Let's try Lowell's friend John Berryman, whose lines from Mistress Bradstreet I airmailed home, snowbound at Moosehead Lake:
Outside the New World winters in grand dark white air lashing high thro’ the virgin stands foxes down foxholes sigh, surely the English heart quails, stunned
and for this conceit, John B, much thanks:                    
‟My psychiatrist can lick your psychiatrist”...
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Walt Whitman, 1819-1892 Leaves of Grass: The First (1855) Edition Penguin Classics, 1961; Lowe & B. Hould 1998. Pablo Neruda, 1904-1973 The captain's verses = Los versos del capitán New Directions, 1972, 2004 John Donne, 1572-1631 To His Coy Mistress Gary Snyder, b.1930 Myths & Texts New Directions, 1978 Robert Lowell, 1917-1977 Epilogue Sidney Goldfarb, b.1942 Speech, for instance : poems Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 1969 Moosehead Lake John Berryman, 1914-1972 Selected poems Library of America, 2004   Louis Simpson, 1923-2012 Collected poems Paragon House, 1988 Bear Mountain this conceit revised July 2024
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